User talk:NatureAppreciator1

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Hello, NatureAppreciator1, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Peer Review
Hello, NatureAppreciator1! I am glad to be working with you. Below is a summary of my review for you.

Content information was concise and well written with a few grammatical errors, though there were a couple small one that I noticed that might be worth going back over. Over all, the added information was necessary and well thought out. Some things I mentioned that you could work on would be to include less bias by allowing for representation from other studies, for example, the study on the effect of climate change, could include another different study if possible to find one, since it is a controversial topic. I would Also include citations where there are none such as the section the Francisco Perito Moreno Discovery, and possibly include more citations in the large chunks of sections that could be backed up a little bit more. It would also be helpful if your sandbox sections were put into order to make a clearer understanding. As a final note, I would suggest updating your lead section to show a better overview of the new information that you are adding as well.

Thanks, I look forward to hearing your review on my work as well--24Okapi24 (talk) 15:06, 5 December 2023 (UTC)