User talk:Naylatohme/sandbox

You have done a very good job at keeping your section clear and concise, but also very descriptive. I really appreciate your choice for this section, it is very interesting. You did a great job collecting reputable sources, and the section is very well structured. I would love to learn more about Hepburn and her background if you have room for that in your section!(Tatumburnett (talk) Tatum). I also think it would be interesting to know more about her background besides information about her mother if you have any of that, such as her education, or her other careers or other family members if she had any? Also it would be nice to see some citations (I'm sure you will be adding some) just to know where and how someone could look up the information you are presenting! It is a very interesting article all together. (Tatumburnett (talk) 18:00, 24 October 2017 (UTC)Tatum)

Peer Editing -Kat
Kbrophy (talk) 03:24, 9 October 2017 (UTC)kbrophy I really like how you found something really interesting to add to such an extensive topic! In the beginning, I might clarify who you are talking about within your parentheses (are you talking about Katherine Hepburn or her mother?). I think you did a great job of being informative and concise at the same time as well as using educated but clear language. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Kbrophy (talk • contribs) 03:17, 9 October 2017 (UTC)