User talk:Nblackall

Chocking
Hi there,

thanks for making your first contribution to Wikipedia on Chocking. Unfortunately, for the moment, I have had to replace the previous redirect as with your edits you missed out on a few key points of editing on Wikipedia. The main thing to remember, especially on new topics, is that everything you put down should be provable from an external source - see WP:V and WP:CITE for more information.

That said, your information was interesting and could well have a place on the encyclopaedia. Do you have any references to books or a governing body that could be used to build the article? If you can find these, i am happy to help you create it.

Regards, OwainDavies (about)(talk) edited at 07:43, 30 March 2010 (UTC)