User talk:Ncathey17

Welcome to Wikipedia from MTHarden
Hi, Ncathey17. I welcome you to Wikipedia! Thank you for all of your edits. I hope you like editing here and being part of Wikipedia! Please sign your name on talk pages using four tildes (~&#126;); when you save the page, this will turn into your name and the date. If you need help, check out Questions, ask me on my talk page, or put  (and what you need help with) on your talk page and someone will show up very soon to answer your questions. Again, welcome! MTHarden (talk) 16:19, 31 August 2011 (UTC)

Hello Ncathey17, from Beebee's wingman
My name is Dan. I'm a huge sports fan and i love playing Call of Duty. I hope to have a career in the medical field someday perhaps as a doctor or surgeon. The human body just fascinates me. Beebee&#39;s wingman (talk) 19:10, 9 September 2011 (UTC)

Hello, Ncathey17, from Nwitzofsky
Hi, Ncathey17. My name is Nick. I received my EMT license in June of 2010, but I too have decided to pursue a career in nursing. I would like to work in an ER, do you have an idea on what kind of nursing you would like to do?

Nwitzofsky (talk) 02:39, 12 September 2011 (UTC)

Hello, Ncathey17, from TBRazzy
Hello Nathan Cathey with red hair. (: I'm Tiffany, I have long hair and always wear skirts. I sit behind you in class. I'm commenting on your page because I'm at the top of the list so there is no name before mine. I thought I would reply back to you. My week has been alright so far, thanks(: And how about yourself? Well, I hope youhave a good remainder of the week and I'll see you tomorrow. TBrazzy (talk) 01:09, 14 September 2011 (UTC)

my week has been great as well thanks for asking and im sorry i dont usually look back behind me in class but im sure ill recognize you some time :) and thanks for just replying back to me cause their was no other names i see how it is lol :p

Week 3
Good job! I found your article linked from your user page, you left a helpful review, and you even signed your comments. Scores will be posted on Moodle. --MTHarden (talk) 01:53, 20 September 2011 (UTC)

Week 6 Assignment from Nwitzofsky
I saw that you added the following sentences to the Trichophagia article:

"Trichophagia is mostly commonly found in adolescents and children. Appromixately five to eighteen percent of childern who have Trichotillomania (which is a skin picking disorder) also ingest hair as well. Thirty seven percent of childern who have Trichophagia and Trichotillamania have a chance of forming trichobezoar. Some of the side affects are loss of hair, stomach growth and vomiting."

The citation for this article looks correct, but you could add the date the article was written and revised ("Received May 27, 2004; revision received Oct. 8, 2004"). I found a few errors with your sentences. First, you stated that Trichotillomania is a "skin picking disorder" while the article states that it is recurrent hair pulling. I would change the word "skin" to "hair" so that it reads: Trichotillomania (which is a hair pulling disorder). Secondly, you have many spelling errors within your paragraphs. The word "children" is spelled wrong twice, once in the second sentence and again in the third sentence. "Approximately" is spelled wrong in the second sentence, and "Trichotillomania" is misspelled in the third sentence as well. Lastly, I would reword the last sentence and change "affects" to "effects."

--Nwitzofsky (talk) 03:29, 10 October 2011 (UTC)