User talk:Nchlumecky/sandbox

Could you please peer-review the following two drafts (and more if you would like) - https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Calum_G_Fraser/sandbox and https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Melanie_Abbott Dwebsterbu (talk)

Peer Review: Your use of links to other articles is really good. I would suggest however that you expend on the Report and Reception sections, explain more, and maybe give more details. Ekoczi —Preceding undated comment added 12:35, 2 November 2013 (UTC)