User talk:Ncnguyen133/Cryoglobulinemic vasculitis

Peer Review Feedback
Peer review guidelines:


 * Check for readability
 * I would link the immunoglobulin article when you use the word for the first time in the intro
 * The part talking about different types of cryoglobulinemia either needs more context about the different types or could be removed and discussed later in the pathophys section
 * Otherwise this feels like an appropriate level
 * Adherence to topic / Not getting off track
 * Epidemiology section is incomplete, otherwise looks promising
 * Organization & Flow
 * The current backbone structure looks good
 * Use of images and figures
 * No images or pictures yet. Could add images of rash?
 * Proper use of citations
 * No citations present yet
 * Paraphrasing
 * Quality Sources, i.e. resources open to the public
 * No references in article yet
 * Check for bias and equal-sided arguments
 * Looks good from this standpoint
 * Provide productive and professional critique
 * This article is still very much in the drafting phase and would benefit from the addition of citations, linking other wiki articles on more difficult words/topics, and completion of epidemiology/diagnosis/manifestations sections.

Medski44 (talk) 15:31, 16 September 2022 (UTC)