User talk:Ncomar1/sandbox

The Lead
This lead isn't working. It has factual inaccuracies (Denmark isn't the oldest monarchy in the world), and it doesn't maintain a neutral point of view (saying that Danish military history is "rich" and "important"). Lastly, the information in the lead doesn't all come from the article itself.

I recommend that you find another article to work on. This article provides no clues as to which parts of the history are the most essential and should be in the lead. Josef Horáček (talk) 04:17, 28 February 2016 (UTC)


 * Use your lead for Sport in Latvia. Add Maris Strombergs to the list of notable athletes you mention in your lead. He's a two-time Olympic champion in BMX racing. The post the lead, and email me when you've done so. Josef Horáček (talk) 02:39, 14 March 2016 (UTC)