User talk:Ncoppa

Since you've removed the under-construction tag, here's some things that need to be fixed in this article: This article has a superb foundation, but it just needs some work to put it into Wikipedia style. I'll help in any way that I can, though the article's topic is way over my head. Realkyhick 21:27, 11 March 2007 (UTC)
 * The word "we" is used several times. First person is not appropriate for an encyclopedia article such as this. It can easily be fixed with a rewrite, but I'm vastly under qualified on this topic, so it is best left to an expert (such as yourself, I presume).
 * Along that same line, this article generally reads a bit more like an essay than an encyclopedic article. Also easily fixed by an expert on the topic.
 * An organization called "NNI" is mentioned. Please name this group. "NNI" is fine on subsequent refereneces.
 * There are no source citations at all. These are greatly needed for a topic of this kind. See WP:CITE.
 * There are no Wikilinks at all. While this article might lend itself to fewer Wikilinks than most articles in general, there's still a good many terms that can be linked, I'm sure.
 * There are no sections. It's all one big chunk of text. It needs to be broken into sections, not just to comply with Wikipedia style, but to make the article more readable.
 * After all of the above are done, the article needs to be categorized. See WP:CAT.

Nanobusiness
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