User talk:Ncsdr/Margaret Campbell Mann Lesley/WikiEditor2562 Peer Review

This page is good, with a few grammatical errors that are easily fixable. "Margaret Campbell Mann Lesley (1891-1988) was an American cytologist and geneticist in plant breeding" would sound better if you stated that she was a geneticits and cytologist who specialized in plant breeding. "Margaret Campbell Mann Lesley was born in Michigan on 1891" the word on should be the word in, as to read " Margaret Campbell Mann Lesley was born in Michigan in the year 1891". Similarly, when describing where she went to school and worked, you use the word "in" multiple times. This is not necessary for example it should read " She received her bachelors degree from University of Oregon in 1915, then continued to work on her doctoral degree AT University of California Berkeley". Another fix is "She began her career as a research associate AT University of California Berkeley, California". The word IN is not required here. The rest is good, just minor grammatical fixes. WikiEditor2562 (talk) 07:11, 24 November 2020 (UTC)