User talk:Ndrcrtn

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Hello, Ndrcrtn, and welcome to Wikipedia! Thank you for your contributions. I hope you like the place and decide to stay. Here are some pages that you might find helpful: I hope you enjoy editing here and being a Wikipedian! Please sign your messages on talk pages using four tildes ( ~ ); this will automatically insert your username and the date. If you need help, check out Questions, ask me on my talk page, or ask your question on this page and then place  before the question. Again, welcome!  Acroterion   (talk)   18:15, 8 May 2012 (UTC)
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Class project
It appears that there is a class project editing urbanism. This is a good thing, but it's not doing much to produce a unified, concise encyclopedia article. Instead, it's produced a rambling overlong jumble of individual elements, which don't do much to illuminate the concept. The article is far too long, goes into far too much detail about individual projects, and written in excessively academic prose. Would some of the participants please broaden their focus to overall article improvement, removing extraneous detail, improving the prose and focus, and generally improving the article rather than just expanding a particular segment?  Acroterion   (talk)   18:15, 8 May 2012 (UTC)

Thank you for you suggestion, this is a working in progress and for next week everything will be more coherent


 * Thanks for responding - I didn't want to thwart article improvement, but it's also important to remember that this is an encyclopedia, and it's starting to look more like an academic paper for specialists rather than an introduction to the subject for laymen. I look forward to the finished product!   Acroterion   (talk)   18:36, 8 May 2012 (UTC)