User talk:Nealfschr/sandbox

Hey, Neal. A few editing suggestions, but only on grammatical issues. Content looks good.

from One Thousand and One Nights, and much of this novella's plot [comma because of new independent clause]

Scheherazade is his favorite author/narrator, and he falls intellectually [comma because of new independent clause]

With the help of the Genie, Sherry and Doony, he devises the plan to tell [subject was unclear and had a plural of the verb devise]

He repeats struggles with impotence through his story. [present tense of narration]

he is Perseus's younger cousin, and he constantly [undid contraction and added comma for independent clause]

He tutored Bellerophon and his twin, Deliades, when they were children [unsure if this is narrated in the story or exposition from the story's past, but "tutored" now matches "were"] Sneumeis (talk) 04:32, 4 June 2015 (UTC)