User talk:Nedrehp0/sandbox

Maybe try to find a different word instead of using "supposedly" in your second sentence. Sentence that starts with "according to..." is a run on sentence so break it up. There are a few different kinds of grammatical errors so work on those but overall the content looks good. Thecivilswar (talk) 20:52, 4 April 2019 (UTC)thecivilswar