User talk:Nedwards58

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Moses
Hi. I noticed a recent edit you made to the Moses article. I don't believe you edit made sense, and I don't believe it made sense in the context of the paragraph you added it to. Starting a sentence with 'Basically genocide was concluded...' simply doesn't make sense. I'm not expert on Moses, so if I'm at fault, my apologies. No offence intended, good luck with your future edits. Rob  ( Talk )  11:25, 3 October 2006 (UTC)


 * Regarding the message you left on my talk page. Thanks for your reply. I totally agree with your defintion of the word genocide. What I cannot understand is the context of your edit as it pertains to the paragraph you added that sentence too, i.e. the edit does not seem (at least to me) to make sense in terms of the context of the paragraph. Maybe your edit needs to be a separate paragraph in the correct context of the overall article. Also on what are you basing your edit, i.e. the 'virgins were sent to Israel as slaves' etc.? Again, I am not an expert on Moses, or relgion in general, but when I saw you edit I honestly had a hard time understanding what you edit meant, in terms of the context of the paragraph you added it to (Phew).  Rob   ( Talk )  14:31, 5 October 2006 (UTC)