User talk:Nehanalla9

Welcome!
Hello, Nehanalla9, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Hello
I just wanted to say hello and hope everything is going well in class. Heronhaus (talk) 20:06, 9 September 2016 (UTC)

Hello Neha...
I am just trying to use Talk page with some edits. Looking forward to have a great semester with you... — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lathivik (talk • contribs) 15:12, 19 September 2016 (UTC)

Feedback
Hi Nehanalla9. Nice start with your draft, but there are a couple things you should focus on as you improve your draft. The first is that Wikipedia articles aren't supposed to give advice. They should never tell people what they should do, they should never be directed at the reader. If you're using "you", there's a good chance you're breaking this rule. Instead of telling people what to do, you should be describing good practices. You should document what experts say. You shouldn't tell people what to do. The second thing is that you should do is to try to avoid lists. Don't avoid them absolutely, but you should always ask yourself if you can better express something as a sentence. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:29, 22 November 2016 (UTC)