User talk:Neil916/Archive 2

Proposed changes to the Ipanema Technologies page
Hi Neil,

Thanks so much for your feedback ages ago to the [|Ipanema Technologies] page. I'm just posting here because we've taken the insight that both you and Jeremy112233 offered, and have made updates along what I hope are the correct lines.

It would be lovely to have your feedback. Hopefully we got it right this time.

Thank you again!

DianneDianneDianne (talk) 15:38, 18 March 2014 (UTC)

Robert Rietti
You sir are very wrong and not able to discern what is every legitimate source.
 * I already responded on your talk page, we were both trying to communicate to each other at the same time. Neil916 (Talk) 06:30, 16 April 2015 (UTC)

my changes on the "monterey bay" article
Hello Neil, I would just like to let you know that the changes I made were correct. I am a history teacher myself, and the contributions i made come from a very long career of studying californian history. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 68.4.35.198 (talk) 05:27, 7 May 2015 (UTC)
 * Your assertions about the naming history of Monterey Bay are contradicted by reliable, printed sources. Neil916 (Talk) 05:35, 7 May 2015 (UTC)

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Whoever this is
Please don't tell me what to do! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2602:306:BDCA:890:3D63:DB1E:1564:3465 (talk) 22:17, 12 August 2015 (UTC)

Reference errors on 21 October
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JSTOR cleanup drive
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FLRC
I have nominated List of cetaceans for featured list removal here. Please join the discussion on whether this article meets the featured list criteria. Articles are typically reviewed for two weeks; editors may declare to "Keep" or "Delist" the article's featured status. The instructions for the review process are here. sst✈discuss 18:25, 13 November 2015 (UTC)

Talk:Grodziskie/GA1
Neil916, I'm not sure why the bot never posted this to your page, but the nomination was failed three weeks ago by David Eppstein, after waiting for a response for over six weeks after the review was posted. (The article's talk page shows that the nomination was failed.)

You may wish to renominate the article, once you've addressed all the issues that were raised by David, but the review you just replied to is closed and cannot be reopened. Best of luck, whatever you decide to do. BlueMoonset (talk) 02:38, 26 January 2016 (UTC)
 * Well, that would be pretty disrespectful to David, since he's put such a large amount of time into reviewing the article already. I've pinged him on his talk page to see if he's interested in following up with it. Neil916 (Talk) 06:40, 26 January 2016 (UTC)

Your GA nomination of Grodziskie
The article Grodziskie you nominated as a good article has been placed on hold. The article is close to meeting the good article criteria, but there are some minor changes or clarifications needing to be addressed. If these are fixed within 7 days, the article will pass; otherwise it may fail. See Talk:Grodziskie for things which need to be addressed. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of David Eppstein -- David Eppstein (talk) 00:01, 26 November 2015 (UTC)

Your GA nomination of Grodziskie
Hi there, I'm pleased to inform you that I've begun reviewing the article Grodziskie you nominated for GA-status according to the criteria. This process may take up to 7 days. Feel free to contact me with any questions or comments you might have during this period. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of David Eppstein -- David Eppstein (talk) 01:00, 22 November 2015 (UTC)

To the Gates of Richmond follow-up
Hello Neil916,

Regarding the comment you left on my talk page a few months ago, yes, it would be absolutely excellent if you could scan the missing pages in Stephen Sears' To the Gates of Richmond: The Peninsula Campaign. I'm sorry I couldn't respond earlier. (check here, if you don't remember. :-))

Come to think of it though, I will be working extensively to improve articles related to the topic. If you don't mind, and if it won't be a burden, could you scan as many pages as possible? The pages I've already gotten (210-248; 338-352) don't need scanning. Thank you in advance. Don't worry if it's a burden. Cheers, --ceradon ( talk  •  contribs ) 05:23, 22 June 2015 (UTC)
 * Ok, I requested the book through my library, I'll let you know when it comes and I get things scanned. Neil916 (Talk) 15:30, 24 June 2015 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much. --ceradon ( talk  •  contribs ) 17:12, 24 June 2015 (UTC)

Thank you for supporting my RfA

 * Well, I'm a long-time lurker at RFA and usually agree with the final outcome and have rarely (if ever? Not sure if I've ever publicly) made a statement. When I saw how sideways yours was going, I took the rare step of making a comment.  I don't think the community made the right choice in this case, but if you ever felt like putting yourself through that again, at least you know what concerns you will need to tackle head on in the beginning.   From what I saw, even though you might have disagreed with the outcome, you always respected the process, even if it didn't go "your way" in the end.  I think your supporters didn't emphasize this enough. Good luck.  Neil916 (Talk) 08:32, 6 February 2016 (UTC)

DYK
Hello! Your submission of Grodziskie at the Did You Know nominations page has been reviewed, and some issues with it may need to be clarified. Please review the comment(s) underneath your nomination's entry and respond there as soon as possible. Thank you for contributing to Did You Know! North America1000 15:15, 2 March 2016 (UTC)

Your GA nomination of Grodziskie
The article Grodziskie you nominated as a good article has been placed on hold. The article is close to meeting the good article criteria, but there are some minor changes or clarifications needing to be addressed. If these are fixed within 7 days, the article will pass; otherwise it may fail. See Talk:Grodziskie for things which need to be addressed. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Kpalion -- Kpalion (talk) 03:01, 9 February 2016 (UTC)

Your GA nomination of Grodziskie
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Grodziskie
I am trying to reorganize the references on the Grodziskie article as outline at Help:List-defined references and Template:Reflist. Now, in the article, the references all have numbers to the appropriate citations, but in the list of references, they all use the "·" character instead of the number of the reference. I can't figure out what I'm doing wrong. Can you spot it? Neil916 (Talk) 16:44, 21 March 2015 (UTC)
 * Additionally, some references that are only used once in the article show up with two reference locators in the reference list. Neil916 (Talk) 17:07, 21 March 2015 (UTC)
 * I have added the missing mark-up. -- Diannaa (talk) 17:47, 21 March 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks for doing that. It's odd, the courier typeface that Wikipedia uses for its demo/source code is really hard to read on my screen (Google Chrome, zoomed 100%, 1920x1080 resolution) and the equals sign doesn't show up at all, so I couldn't figure out what was missing, even when I went back and stared at the help page.  Neil916 (Talk) 20:03, 21 March 2015 (UTC)

Featuring your work on Wikipedia's front page: DYKs
Thank you for your recent articles, including Bernard of Wąbrzeźno, which I read with interest. When you create an extensive and well referenced article, you may want to have it featured on Wikipedia's main page in the Did You Know section. Articles included there will be read by thousands of our viewers. To do so, add your article to the list at T:TDYK. Let me know if you need help, Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus&#124; reply here 15:57, 2 February 2016 (UTC)
 * Thanks, .  DYK hasn't been high on my list of priorities, so I don't think I'll have time to wade through all the process of getting that done.  Glad you liked it.  Neil916 (Talk) 17:27, 2 February 2016 (UTC)

Your GA nomination of Grodziskie
The article Grodziskie you nominated as a good article has failed ; see Talk:Grodziskie for reasons why the nomination failed. If or when these points have been taken care of, you may apply for a new nomination of the article. Message delivered by Legobot, on behalf of Kpalion -- Kpalion (talk) 19:42, 29 February 2016 (UTC)
 * The article has passed and I have yet to figure out why the bot thought otherwise. Sorry about that, and congrats again! — Kpalion(talk) 19:57, 29 February 2016 (UTC)
 * Yes, it's not the first time the bot did this. Anyway, congratulations! —David Eppstein (talk) 20:06, 29 February 2016 (UTC)
 * (e/c) Apparently, it's a bot bug and it has happened before (Wikipedia talk:Good article nominations). — Kpalion(talk) 20:13, 29 February 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your help, David and Kpalion.  I appreciate it. Neil916 (Talk) 16:42, 2 March 2016 (UTC)

Danziger Jopenbier?
Hi Neil, I just thought, if you're into rather obscure historical Central European beer styles, then maybe you'd like to write an article one day about  / ? In English Wikipedia we have an article about Jopen, which is a Dutch beer brand, but I'm talking about a thick, syrupy porter historically brewed in Danzig/Gdańsk. The barley wort was fermented in open vats under thick layers of mold (probably impossible to recreate today as the original mold strains have been lost). If you're interested, I can help with Polish sources. — Kpalion(talk) 10:20, 5 March 2016 (UTC)
 * Hmm, interesting.  I would be interested in looking into that.  I'll do a bit of digging to see if I can turn up anything.   Neil916 (Talk) 16:23, 5 March 2016 (UTC)

DYK for Grodziskie
&mdash; Coffee //  have a cup  //  beans  // 00:02, 19 March 2016 (UTC)


 * Well, that's interesting. According to the page stats, the page gets an average of 75 pageviews a day, but on the day it was on DYK, it generated 1768 pageviews.  Neil916 (Talk) 17:38, 21 March 2016 (UTC)

Africa Destubathon
Hi, thanks for your work so far! Can you do me a favour though and always add every entry you do to the main list here as well as the entries page, regardless if yet approved or not as that's the master list of all articles being done. It's just veyr time consuming for me to be judging the articles, trying to contribute myself and chasing up what people have done and filling it out for people each time. So if you can take care of that this would be a great help, there's some part filled out ones underneath so you just need to add country, article name and then you username. Thanks.♦ Dr. Blofeld  20:33, 16 October 2016 (UTC)
 * Yes. Sorry, I didn't see that list as well.  Neil916 (Talk) 02:34, 17 October 2016 (UTC)

Did you add Synodontis notatus to the main list? was going to add it but didn't want to double it!♦ Dr. Blofeld  19:32, 17 October 2016 (UTC)
 * Yes, I did. Neil916 (Talk) 19:49, 17 October 2016 (UTC)


 * Synodontis granulosus is whinging that there are a couple of unused references in the reflist - see the bottom of the page. Thanks for massively improving the article. --Tagishsimon (talk) 16:55, 20 October 2016 (UTC)
 * Whoops, missed that. Thanks for the heads up. Neil916 (Talk) 17:07, 20 October 2016 (UTC)

Original prose
Hi, an editor has alerted me to the fact that you've been copying a lot of the text exactly for multiple articles. The idea is more original prose. I can understand in species where it is difficult to find enough text for a destub that some text may be used again to pad it out but in some cases it's 3/4 of the whole article. If he's working hard to destub articles with original prose each time it's a bit of a mismatch. I don't want to put either of you off though, as it's still destubbing work, and you're both working hard, and it's much appreciated. What do you think on this?♦ Dr. Blofeld  22:17, 7 November 2016 (UTC)


 * It is a valid point. I'll let you decide.  Obviously, two species of the same genus are going to share a lot of the same physical characteristics and I believe that the edits/entries meet the spirit, as well as the letter, of the goal of expanding stub articles, and that the newly destubbed articles represent significant improvements (compare this to this.  I have also invested a significant amount of work in creating the articles, and being able to reuse writing that applies to multiple species does allow me to save a significant amount of time compared to someone who is starting from scratch each time.  The genus Synodontis is large, with 131 species.  There will be a lot of duplicated material, but it's more work than changing a few words between articles.  I'm working on those articles because they are low-hanging fruit, so to speak. If you want me to stop, I will.   Neil916 (Talk) 22:45, 7 November 2016 (UTC)

Perhaps if you kept it to no more than 750 bytes copied text would be happier with that? I personally don't mind of course as I greatly appreciate the work you've done on this, I just want to keep everybody happy :-)♦ Dr. Blofeld  10:59, 8 November 2016 (UTC)


 * Well, I appreciate your reassurance. I don't see the 750 byte limit as being terribly helpful for a few reasons.  First, what is "copied text"?  I have three species of fish, two of them are commercially harvested, and in those two articles, I put the phrase "This species has commercial importance in the fisheries industry", or something to that effect, with a citation.  Is that copied text because it appears in two of the three articles?   Some information remains the same across species, but changes in others.  Sometimes, it's just not known.  Take the diet.   In some species, the diet has been studied, and it is known.  If I have it, I write about it.  Other species may only be known from preserved specimens, and they have not been studied in the wild.  I feel it's more helpful to the reader of the article to give some context to the reader to identify the fact that where studies have been made on other species in the same genus, we have found that they generally have an omnivorous diet at a certain trophic level, rather than just let the reader wonder if these fish feed on algae, or are they eating crocodiles?  That's boilerplate text, copied between articles.  But it adds more value than leaving it out because someone is worried that I'm not working hard enough to expand the article.  Statements about the physical appearance of the fish are the same.  I know that since the fish is a member of Synodontis, it has a downward-facing mouth with thick lips, three pairs of barbels, strong spines in the dorsal fin and pectoral fins that the fish uses for protection, and a forked tail.   Yep, so that's going to be duplicated across all 131 articles.   I think including a general description of the fish is helpful.  Sometimes I know information about the coloration of the fish, and I include that, other times I don't, or I'm not confident enough that the source meets WP's reliability standards.   Sometimes I just don't have access to a resource, but let's not lose sight of the fact that this is a destubbing project, not a project to bring these articles to featured articles.  I don't feel the least bit guilty at just taking one step with an article and leaving it at Start class.   I guess I'll start winding down this rant, but the nuts and bolts of it is that the WP:FISH project lists 13,200 fish stubs, at least some of them are in Africa and can be used in this project.   If another editor is concerned that I'm not working hard enough, they are welcome to tackle as many of those 13,200 articles as they want, and they can see that there's real work involved.   I started with Synodontis because it's a genus that is widely distributed across Africa, and the existing stubs were had good categorization and taxoboxes.  And after I went through some of my other resources that described the Genus, I started hitting the fish by country category and started working on destubbing the Synodontis species articles that I hadn't gotten to.  And yes, DRC was the first country I hit.  And yes, there were a bunch of Synodontis species that are endemic to DRC.   There are a lot of fish that are endemic or native to the area.  There will probably be more.  But that's why after scattering my entries across a bunch of different countries, I suddenly dumped 10 articles over two days entered under one country.  There are actually more that I've already destubbed that are native to DRC but I haven't entered because they're native to more than one country and I haven't decided where to enter them.  And I was planning to do the same with other country categories until I finish out Synodontis.  Because doing it that way is the most efficient way to spend my time.   And after I'm done with Synodontis. I'll move on to other genera, and maybe I'll be dumping a bunch of more entries in DRC again later, if I get to it.


 * Ultimately, it's your contest, you're the judge.  If you say stop doing it, I'll move on to other projects.  If you say you want me to include less information in the articles, I'll probably just move on to other projects.  There won't be hard feelings either way.  But the argument that the work I'm doing is unfair because it's too easy for me trivializes my contributions.   If someone wants to get a slice of the easy work, they can take a crack at Barbus, there are 302 species over there, most of them are stubs. Neil916 (Talk) 21:48, 8 November 2016 (UTC)


 * Since no one is responding and it appears you stopped with the contest, as another contestant I say carry on. Sometimes a lot of info is shared between articles; be it a satellite family, Olympics information, etc. That is how it is, and I think you should keep going. Good work so far either way! Kees08 (talk) 06:59, 11 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you for responding, . I haven't been contributing recently because I've been a bit under the weather, but will resume in the near future when I feel better and have more free time.  Neil916 (Talk) 20:20, 11 November 2016 (UTC)

I'm really sorry that you stopped contributing to this as I certainly had no problem with your articles myself. You were one of the most valuable contributors. But I had a complaint so had heoped to find a solution, I hadn't read your response until now as you didn't ping me unfortunately. I would likely allow you to have continued as before, but if health is the issue, that's vital to productivity, so hope you feel better soon.♦ Dr. Blofeld  15:06, 20 November 2016 (UTC)

Prizes
Hi, as you did a lot of wildlife articles I think you could claim enough articles to win some vouchers under "Most geography and wildlife articles destubbed" if you want them at here.♦ Dr. Blofeld  10:53, 28 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you for the heads up.  I think that I might have been missed on the most entries for DRC as well.  Neil916 (Talk) 18:26, 28 November 2016 (UTC)
 * sending a ping because my recent edits cleaning up my talkpage, ending with my revert of the talkpage spam about arbcom elections with the edit summary "rv spam" might have unintentionally sent the wrong message, if you only had my talk page on your watchlist. Neil916 (Talk) 08:06, 29 November 2016 (UTC)

WikiProject Africa/The 10,000 Challenge
After a well-deserved break, feel free to continue contributing towards this!♦ Dr. Blofeld  14:05, 30 November 2016 (UTC)

Collect your prize
Hi, please carefully read the instructions at the bottom of Wikipedia talk:WikiProject Africa/The Africa Destubathon for collecting your prize. I will need you to send me an email, your wiki name, what I owe you and your preference for currency in dollars or pounds/country of residence.♦ Dr. Blofeld  14:42, 13 December 2016 (UTC)

I've sent you $45, you'll need to claim it and then confirm it on the Destubathon talk page, thanks.♦ Dr. Blofeld  17:11, 13 December 2016 (UTC)

Women in Red World Contest
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