User talk:Nelu555/sandbox

Laminoplasty Project on Nelu555 userpage - Gayan, Patel, Cheung

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Nice work on your draft. My only real concern is your use of this link as a source, since it's a commercial website, not a scholarly source.

Everything else is just formatting. Section headers use sentence capitalization, not title capitalization; only the first word of the title, and proper nouns, should be capitalized. They should use "and" instead of an ampersand (&), and usually shouldn't repeat the article title. Nice work. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 19:53, 5 April 2018 (UTC)