User talk:NeoFreak/sandbox/1st Special Forces Group

= CIA years =

Hi, nice you show me a sandbox. I came here via Sergei Nilus, curious who is interested in that matter. While I am reading, I may just as well do a little proofreading I thought, even if I am a Kraut?

This one catches my eyes but maybe I would interfere more than you want me to?

"After only two years this program led several hundred villages, hundreds of thousands of civilians, hundreds of square miles of territory and 38,000 local militia members the ability to defend themselves and their land from Viet Cong influence."

The "led" troubles me. If you think it is correct, and my foreign ears miss something here. You should take out the "square miles", they quite sure won't be led anywhere. There are just to many possibilities to correct. So I better leave that one to the author. I hope you are fine? 06:50, 16 June 2007 (UTC)