User talk:Nephx

Chesley Sullenberger
Hi. Welcome to Wikipedia, and thanks for working to improve the site with your edit to Chesley Sullenberger, as we really appreciate your participation. However, the edit had to be reverted, because Wikipedia requires that the material in its articles be accompanied by reliable, verifiable usually secondary sources. One Wikipedia articles cannot be cited as a source in another, because that is circular sourcing. When added material, make sure the citation is at the end of the supported material, and not in the middle of it, as indicated by WP:PAIC.

In addition, outside of bulleted lists or tables, material in Wikipedia should be written in a formal, NPOV tone, in a journalistic style, and in the form of complete sentences, with additions to sections should incorporated seamlessly with respect to the material already in those sections. Your addition was written like a press release, contained two redundant mentions of a date, a double-hyphen in lieu of properly explanatory wording, and an ampersand used as a substitute for the word and, which WP:& indicates is inappropriate.

If you ever have any other questions about editing, or need help regarding the site's policies, just let me know by leaving a message for me in a new section at the bottom of my talk page. Thanks. Nightscream (talk) 19:06, 16 April 2014 (UTC)