User talk:Nerphball11/Angelos Galanopoulos

Your entry has a number of stylistic issues, most notably the frequency of incomplete sentences. Please note that Wikipedia style is one of complete sentences, even if these must be short. In addition to these, there are a number of typographical and grammatical errors that could have been corrected with proper proofreading. Please note my corrections in the revised Wikipedia version.

Please note that hyperlinks are essential to the value of a Wikipedia entry. It is important to include hyperlinks to entries on various insitutions, concepts, and geographical locations to facilitate the reader's access to information that is not necessary to include in the entry.

Your references and bibliography section need work to put them in a standard for for Wikipedia. Hoopes (talk) 23:46, 26 November 2012 (UTC)