User talk:Newjackwriter

I have added some new material supporting this subject and I am an expert in this field. However, I need some assistance in removing the issues cited on the top of the page before the subject because most everything is repaired and I need some help. This is quit notworthy and has expanded through many people assisting. I hope more will assist in finalizing this. I am new at this and did my best.
 * You are an expert in what field? I don't mean that as a challenge, but I fail to see how that fact applies with regard to the article or the issues in the maintenace tags (which you have not addressed in your edits or in this request).  I also fail to see that "most everything is repaired"; can you explain how the issues have been addressed?  Tide  rolls  04:02, 26 November 2011 (UTC)


 * How can you be an expert on the field of a person's life? Anyway, after taking a brief look at it, there aren't any references to his education and although his father's barber career is referenced (why even mention it?), his children, etc., aren't referenced.  I would just delete the Education and Personal sections, or use other references.  The rest of the article seems good at first glance, although I haven't checked the references or really even read most of it.  You just want to be careful that it's not a copy/paste from the references, but that important stuff does have a reference so that people aren't just taking your word for it, so that they can go to other sources and see for themselves that it's true.   Banaticus (talk) 04:49, 26 November 2011 (UTC)