User talk:Newmedialabman

Thank you for your latest contribution to St. Anthony Hall. However, I removed most of your edits because they did not fit within the typical encyclopedia format. (As a rule, adding a full paragraph to the introduction of a long article is rarely a seamless addition.)

Here is the text of those edits. I include them here to encourage you to better incorporate them into the text and topic of the St. Anthony Hall:

''While some mistakenly identify St. Anthony as the patron saint of writers, as a hermit and founder of monasticism, Anthony is identified with the "book of nature" and not writing. St. Anthony was the focus of a Roman Catholic Hospital Order which flourished from the 13th to 18th centuries and was responsible for treating the effects of ergot poisoning or St. Anthony's Fire. Today's Alpha chapter is decorated with prints of "The Temptation of St. Anthony."''

When editing, please remember that our audience is not members of a particular organization, but rather the world at large. Thus references to an "alpha chapter" before the identity of said chapter is introduced is confusing.

Also please remember that phrases like "Some mistakenly identify" is considered a Weasel Phrase that avoids accountability; please see WP:Weasel.

I take it you are new to Wikipedia. Welcome! I hope you continue to contribute. Laser813 (talk) 15:20, 28 December 2007 (UTC)