User talk:Newyork.dream

November 2009
Please do not add content without citing verifiable and reliable sources, as you did to Grant's Farm. Before making any potentially controversial edits, it is recommended that you discuss them first on the article's talk page. Please review the guidelines at Citing sources and take this opportunity to add references to the article. Thank you. ''Please stop adding this material in without a source that actually says the Clydesdales have been removed. Neither the official webpage nor the one you keep linking to state this (yet).'' umrguy  42  15:16, 17 November 2009 (UTC)

Grant's Farm
Hi Newyork.dream, in addition to suggesting you read some of the links above, I particularly want to encourage you to watch the tone of your additions - Wikipedia is an encyclopedia, and you seem to be writing more like a tourist brochure in tone. In particular, see WP:Advertising, point #5. umrguy 42  16:41, 17 November 2009 (UTC)
 * Also, please read WP:MINOR about when to mark your edits as "minor". In a nutshell, significant addition of content (as opposed to merely fixing typos, rearranging sentences, correcting links/references, and formatting changes) should NOT be marked as "minor". umrguy  42  16:43, 17 November 2009 (UTC)