User talk:Newyou2020/sandbox

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This outline is well-structured. I believe you should go more into detail about the influence of other external parties in the development of renewable energy in Ethiopia. It would be helpful to include a brief history of renewable energy in Africa and to place Ethiopia in a category of effectiveness in the region. Donkask (talk) 03:33, 14 November 2020 (UTC)

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This outline provides a good overview of what the article will cover, and it seems like the article is divided into sections that aid the logical flow of the article. Regarding the Growth and Transformation Plan mentioned in the article lead, it might be helpful to add a section that goes into further detail, describing the plan and the policies that have been enacted as a part of it. I think it would also be helpful to include information on how NGOs and other advocacy groups have impacted the transition to renewable energy in Ethiopia. Sago1031 (talk) 22:52, 13 November 2020 (UTC)

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This is a good outline of what you plan to cover about Renewable resources in Ethiopia. The one question I have is maybe making the connection to politics a little bit clearer. I think you would probably have to connect back to the policy as you go into hydroelectronics, biomass, etc. How has the policy been implemented locally. Has this plan changed its objective at any point in time? Something like that maybe. Sleuthsr — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sleuthsr21 (talk • contribs) 23:58, 13 November 2020 (UTC)