User talk:Ngaito/sandbox

Overall, you did a really good job! In your opening sentence the first thing I would do is explain what NWP stands for. In your closing paragraph I would may be add things such as how long did it take for women protesters to get out of jail? Or after they got out of jail, did any women file any lawsuits for being arrested while protesting peacefully? I really enjoyed reading this and learned a lot from it! Mirandaboes (talk) 19:27, 3 December 2018 (UTC)