User talk:Ngard11476

Your submission at Articles for creation: Bowen Family Systems Theory (March 28)
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This draft reads like a long information brochure about the therapeutic approach. See Wikipedia is not for essays.

Robert McClenon (talk) 14:28, 28 March 2019 (UTC)

Speedy deletion nomination of Draft:Bowen Family Systems Theory


A tag has been placed on Draft:Bowen Family Systems Theory requesting that it be speedily deleted from Wikipedia. This has been done under section G12 of the criteria for speedy deletion, because the page appears to be an unambiguous copyright infringement. This page appears to be a direct copy from https://thebowencenter.org/theory/eight-concepts/. For legal reasons, we cannot accept copyrighted text or images taken from other web sites or printed material, and as a consequence, your addition will most likely be deleted. You may use external websites or other printed material as a source of information, but not as a source of sentences. This part is crucial: say it in your own words. Wikipedia takes copyright violations very seriously and persistent violators will be blocked from editing.

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COI
You have an obvious conflict of interest and you must declare it. If you work directly or indirectly for an organisation, or otherwise are acting on its behalf, you are very strongly discouraged from attempting to write an article at all. If you are paid directly or indirectly by the organisation you are writing about, you are  required by the Wikimedia Terms of Use to disclose your employer, client and affiliation. You can post such a mandatory disclosure to your user page at User:. The template Paid can be used for this purpose – e.g. in the form:   . If you are being compensated, please provide the required disclosure. Note that editing with a COI is discouraged, but permitted as long as it is declared. Concealing a COI can lead to a block. Please do not edit further until you respond to this message.

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Before attempting to write an article again, please make sure that the topic meets the notability criteria linked above, and check that you can find independent third party sources. Also read Your first article. You must also reply to the COI request above Jimfbleak - talk to me?  15:09, 28 March 2019 (UTC)


 * Thanks for your email. You need to understand that in giving permission here, you are allowing your contributions to be used, modified and distributed for any purpose, including commercial, which may not be what you want. In any case, although we often restore deleted text for improvement, for legal reasons that doesn't include copyright material.
 * Please note what I have said above. To continue editing on this topic, you must declare your COI in the prescribed manner
 * Even if it wasn't copyright, the article isn't suitable as it stands. It's completely lacking in independent third-party sources and unencyclopaedic, with its case studies and discussions, rather than facts. It seems to have little purpose other than to promote his theory, but even that has to follow a lengthy biography of Bowen himself.
 * Have a look at some of these articles: Conatus, Confirmation bias, Reactive attachment disorder, Throffer, Eric A. Havelock, Hilary Putnam Bernard Williams to get some idea how to write a Wikipedia article. You don't need that level of detail, but you need to get layout, tone and referencing right Jimfbleak -  talk to me?  17:06, 29 March 2019 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (April 8)
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Theroadislong (talk) 16:11, 8 April 2019 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Bowen Systems Theory (May 3)
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Robert McClenon (talk) 11:21, 3 May 2019 (UTC)

May 2019
Your addition to Draft:Bowen Systems Theory has been removed in whole or in part, as it appears to have added copyrighted material to Wikipedia without evidence of permission from the copyright holder. If you are the copyright holder, please read Donating copyrighted materials for more information on uploading your material to Wikipedia. For legal reasons, Wikipedia cannot accept copyrighted material, including text or images from print publications or from other websites, without an appropriate and verifiable license. All such contributions will be deleted. You may use external websites or publications as a source of information, but not as a source of content, such as sentences or images&mdash;you must write using your own words. Wikipedia takes copyright very seriously and persistent violators of our copyright policy will be blocked from editing. See Copying text from other sources for more information. Robert McClenon (talk) 11:26, 3 May 2019 (UTC)

Caution
It appears that your only edits are efforts to insert a copyrighted article on Bowen Family Systems Theory or Bowen Systems Theory, which may have been intended to promote a particular style of family therapy. Wikipedia takes copyright very seriously, and is not a repository for copies of copyrighted material, and is not the medium to advertise a particular mode of family therapy. Any further efforts to insert copyrighted material or promotional material or both into Wikipedia may be reported to administrators and may result in a block. Robert McClenon (talk) 16:07, 3 May 2019 (UTC)