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World Food Council
World Food Council (WFC) was a United Nations organization established in December 1974 by the UN General Assembly. The World Food Council was created by recommendation of the World Food Conference. The headquarters for WFC was located in Rome, Italy.

In the early 1970's there was seen to be an incline in food shortages throughout many developing countries in Africa along with parts of Southeast Asia. This food shortage resulted from a lack of progress in the world fight against hunger and malnutrition, and also by very slow progress in the creation of a system of internationally coordinated cereal reserves to meet crop shortfalls and other abnormal situations.

As a result of this incline in food shortages, the General Assembly made the decision in 1973 to hold a conference to address global food problems. This conference was labeled as "The UN World Food Conference", and took place in Rome, Italy in 1974 (Rome, Italy also became the WFC's headquarters location).From a result of this conference it was called for the creation of a 36 member ministerial level World Food Council. This council would come together annually to review major problems and policy issues affecting the world food situation and to bring its political influence to bear on governments and UN bodies and agencies alike.

WFC's goal was to serve as coordinating body for national ministries of agriculture to help reduce malnutrition and hunger. -What was the perception of the WFC in the countries that required their assistance?Gkm460 (talk) 19:28, 3 March 2018 (UTC)

The World Food Council met each year in plenary session at the invite of a member's state until 1992. WFC was officially suspended in 1993 and was one of the only few UN organization's to ever be suspended. WFC's functions were absorbed by the Food and Agriculture Organization of the United Nations and the World Food Programme. -Why was the WFC suspended?Gkm460 (talk) 19:28, 3 March 2018 (UTC)

Read more: http://www.nationsencyclopedia.com/United-Nations/Economic-and-Social-Development-WORLD-FOOD-COUNCIL-WFC.html#ixzz585RbT2W4

A few suggestions to improve this article:Gkm460 (talk) 19:28, 3 March 2018 (UTC) -This is a great article so far, you have included lots of information to expand the WFC page!Gkm460 (talk) 19:28, 3 March 2018 (UTC) -Consider a few more diverse sources. Check out the MUN library website for journal articles and other peer review sources to help improve the reliability and validity of your article.Gkm460 (talk) 19:28, 3 March 2018 (UTC) -Make sure to cite all the information you have already included in your article. You can insert citations as you are writing the article in your sandbox.Gkm460 (talk) 19:28, 3 March 2018 (UTC) -Consider adding a few different headings throughout the article to organize your ideas.Gkm460 (talk) 19:28, 3 March 2018 (UTC)

Davyani's Peer Review
The article has a great lead section by reflecting on the most important points of the topic, but missing the structure. This can be changed by using sections to touch various aspects of the subject of the article such as the history, accomplishments, failures, background, history and other subsections as well to produce a very well organized article that yields much more information to the readers. And by hyperlinks to other Wikipedia articles, you can increase the traffic to your article!

Furthermore, to ensure a balanced coverage of the topic, an important tip can be used i.e. the section length is equal to its importance to the article's subject and to obtain the information from various sources. To increase the authenticity of the article, more reliable sources like journals and peer-reviewed articles can be used to enrich the content of the article, one for example 'Canadian Journal of Development Studies, 2010, Vol30(3-4),pp.663-694 [Peer Reviewed Journal] by Shaw D.J."The World Food Council:The rise and fall of a United Nations Body"' form the MUN database is a great and reliable source to obtain more info under the various sections of the article.

So far the article has neutral content and is trying to persuade the reader to accept any viewpoint. Just looking into some of the resources and points highlighted above,can further improve the content of the article. Davyani123 (talk) 14:54, 3 March 2018 (UTC)

Adri354's peer review; This article is got some good improvement, therefore i would recomend the writter to find more sources and more reliables ones. Also there are some grammar mistakes, the rest of the article is really good and has been improved a lot since the start of the project. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Adri354 (talk • contribs) 15:41, 15 March 2018 (UTC)

Hello, i am peer reviewing this article, after reading it i came up with some recommendations, there are; 1. Organize the article in a better way, having a specific order, so the article could be easier to undertand for the reader, 2. Find more reliables sources, such as the UN website where you can find all the information you need to improve this article. Also i would like to congratulate you because the article is way better than what it was when you first started editing it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Dahr26.dh (talk • contribs) 15:56, 15 March 2018 (UTC)