User talk:Nguyenandrew/sandbox

Nguyenandrew Peer Review
This new section would be a great addition to the article, and fits in well with the overall nature of it. I like how you provide an explanation of your subtopic while also providing examples (like the one from Virginia). I would expand a little more on that example though; what did the government do specifically to recruit more businesses? Other than that, this new section would go great with the article. In fact, I am surprised it hasn't been very covered yet in that article.

Peer Review by AsutenCis
Really good start. Good structure throughout and a good amount of information. I don't see any grammatical errors and you keep a good encyclopedic tone. Keep it up. — Preceding unsigned comment added by AustenCis (talk • contribs) 02:32, 3 April 2018 (UTC)