User talk:Nhart2/Selma to Montgomery marches

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Hi Nicole. I don't see your edits/changes appearing here. Please make sure to edit/add at least a paragraph and to include sources for all statements made. Crisedevers (talk) 17:04, 28 October 2022 (UTC)

Nicole, I think you have a sufficient amount of information regarding this topic that will be very definitely for wikipedia. I believe you just need to add your written sources in, and I would personally add some more information to some blunt sentences. For example, "The second march took place on March 9." I would either combine that with another sentence or simply add another detail in there. --Abossie0820 (talk) 16:13, 7 November 2022 (UTC)