User talk:Nhyer

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Hello,, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Shalor and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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Godzilla
Hi! I wanted to give you a little feedback on the content you added to the article for Godzilla. By large what you added was good - it was not only interesting (it was stuff I didn't know about the movie) but it was also well sourced. The only thing that I was concerned about was that it was written in more of an essay style than as an encyclopedia article. Basically, it read like the claims you added were something you came up with rather than being something that someone else wrote about the movie. I went ahead and did a quick revision so hopefully the content won't be removed. The main thing is just stating that such and such academic or authority made the claims - I didn't name anyone since I wasn't sure which person made what claim, so if you wanted to go after me and fix anything, feel free. Shalor (Wiki Ed) (talk) 23:20, 10 July 2017 (UTC)