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Emily's Peer Review
The comments on the quotes you found give a good idea of what you can add to the article. The Cargo Cult Science article does have a lot of room for improvement such as adding pictures. I notice that there isn't a clear description of cargo cult science, just examples. You could improve the article by giving a concise definition of cargo cult science and adding a few more examples of how it is used in current situations. There may be other speeches like Feynman's that could give the article more content.

Thanks for the review, I will look for other speeches and about cargo cult science, so far it has been to narrow out a subject to generate many good sources or analyses of it NicBella (talk) 02:25, 7 March 2018 (UTC)nic bella

Further response to peer review
I think ive aleady edited the definiton of cargo cult science in the lead in but since you said it may need attention i will try to iron it out further, thanks for the feedback NicBella (talk) 02:27, 7 March 2018 (UTC)nic