User talk:NiciaD/sandbox

=Evaluations=

1/30/2018 Evaluation by akuresacred
Spelling/Grammar

Meets standard

I found a few grammar and spelling mistakes such as "the city's population," "approved to become the leader of Verona," "stronghold," and "at a meeting."

Language

Meets Standard

"The French in the area" and "in a similar way to how the Venetians had" sound too informal for an encyclopedia entry. Also, you use "November 18th" instead of "November 18," and "May 30th" instead of "May 30."

Organization

Exceeds standard

Coding

Exceeds standard

Validity

Exceeds standard.

Completion

Exceeds standard. Relevance

Meets standard.

I'm not sure if "killing an average of 568 people per 1000" is relevant to your topic.

Sources

Meets standard.

All of your sources look good but you didn't put a link for "Le traité de paix de Presbourg, Article 4 (26 Décembre 1805)."

Citations

Exceeds standard

References

Exceeds standard