User talk:Nick Hajaly/sandbox

Peer review
The article on the "Environmental impact of fishing" is really good and explains the topic well. The only suggestion I would make is it would be helpful if you could explain more about marine reserves and how they are created and what they are and if any already exist in the world. perhaps there is a hyperlink you can add to marine reserves so that the reader can inform themselves more on the topic. --Anthony f (talk) 16:09, 16 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks for your feedback Anthony! I've made the changes you've suggested. Nick Hajaly (talk) 01:48, 21 February 2018 (UTC)

In regards to the part about the stress brought upon fish in the catch-and-release section, are there any reports that confirm if this has an adverse effect on ecological integrity? If so, it might be better suited to include this information in the "Ecological Disruption" part of the article. While the catch-and-release method is an interesting part of the "Possible Remedies" section, following it with a sentence that mentions the negative impacts of fishing in general kind of discredits the first sentence which states catch-and-release is a possible remedy. However, if more specific information can be provided about how to mitigate the negative effects of catch-and-release fishing, you might be able to leave it in the "Possible Remedies" section. Overripe Pear (talk) 19:27, 17 February 2018 (UTC)
 * I did end up finding more literature that was in favour of CRC as a proper remedy. Thanks again for the feedback! Nick Hajaly (talk) 01:48, 21 February 2018 (UTC)

Somehow I am the third person reviewing yours! -Can you briefly explain hystersis, or link to it on Wiki if in existence? -Wiki link to Black Sea should be added. -Might be good to include examples from places where ghost fishing occurs -Catch & Release sentence you are unsure of, I would include but maybe speak in more general term saying that physical injuries cause stress/harm -Overall, really like the organization and succinct summaries. Main suggestion is to link to other Wikis whenever possible! Maral.m (talk) 20:14, 17 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the feedback Maral. I made the relevant links to other wiki articles and also expanded the ghost fishing section Nick Hajaly (talk) 01:48, 21 February 2018 (UTC)

I'm not too sure how I'm the fourth person commenting here...anyway, I would like to say that first and foremost, you have excellent grammar!!! Very well worded and easy to understand. You wrote in brackets that you want to remove the titles that you have in your section, but perhaps keeping them as sub-headers? Keep it up! --Mstanley294 (talk) 02:20, 18 February 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the feedback Megan! I'll definitely consider keeping the headers when bringing the article to the main space Cheers Nick Hajaly (talk) 01:48, 21 February 2018 (UTC)