User talk:Nickgrecco

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Fannie May
Hi - I just reverted your edit to Fannie May, for two reasons. First, it seemed that you were writing about 1-800-Flowers rather than the subject of the article (unless I've misunderstood you?), so the information wasn't relevant to this article. Also, the edit, as you worded it, seemed promotional. You wrote '...allows shoppers to select from their wide selection of candy, meeting their expectations.' This is very subjective - is their range of candy particularly wide, compared to the ranges of similar companies? What expectations are being met? The aim here is to write entirely objective, neutral prose, without praising or criticising the subject. I hope that makes sense - if I've misunderstood, or you have any questions, drop me a line on my talk page. Cheers Girth Summit  (blether)  17:22, 4 May 2019 (UTC)