User talk:Nickmac27/I-Empire

What you have here is a good starting point for additions to this article! The 2018 re-release information seems particularly relevant and looks like it would fit well in the existing "Release and promotion" section of the article. The biggest notes I have as you continue researching, adding, and revising are:
 * The single biggest thing is what content are you still planning to add, expand, or update? Is there anything about critical reception that could be expanded, or have tracks from this album been used in film or television? What else can be added here? Locating additional sources will likely be very helpful in giving you material with which to continue your work on this article.
 * There is already a tracklist with track times in the article, so I'm not sure if you've copied that into your sandbox because you have plans to do something additional with it, or if this is duplicated information
 * I'm curious about the use of "would" in the sentence "This specific vinyl would include two acoustic bonus tracks." It suggests that this vinyl ended up not happening after all (or maybe hasn't happened yet? Although in that case, "will" is probably the better bit of language to reach for)
 * Each statement of fact (such as "On December 7th, 2018 the vinyl was released again as a limited edition copy with four options of a Clear, Gold, Orange Haze, or White Smoke finish") should have a link to the relevant source(s) in your reflist at the end of the sentence, rather than just once at the end of the paragraph.

I think those are my biggest notes based on this draft. Let me know if you have any questions, and I look forward to seeing your final edits! Nicoleccc (talk) 01:40, 9 November 2019 (UTC)