User talk:Nickpickett16/sandbox

Hello. I have included a few bullet points.


 * The B in Black has to be capitalized throughout the entire article
 * The intro needs some heavy edits. It goes around several topics and I think it should be centralized
 * There needs to be a section that focuses on the contributions made by Black Women

Hi Nick! Just doing a peer review on your article on the Black power movement. This is already kind of a long article, so it might be difficult for you to find significant materials to add. The article leaves out many women who were influential within the Black Power Movement, which is a good place to start. I think it also could be useful to add more information about the Black Power Movement now, and potentially link the article to the Black Lives Matter movement and do a deeper comparison of the two. Also there are many places within the article that need citations or grammatical fixes, which is a good place to start as well. NicoleR18 (talk) 19:12, 20 May 2019 (UTC)

Another Peer Review: I third the motion for Black women contributors. An interesting take could also be connections to the literary world. What authors were influenced by the Black Panthers? What poems are associated? I found this relevant journal https://journals.sagepub.com/doi/pdf/10.1177/002193479802900107 that might be of use. I would also say the "Black Panther Party Liberation Schools" could use some citations and more information. I believe pictures of pamphlets (for example) are available. Have fun! -Kim Not Overit (talk)