User talk:NicoleBennett93/sandbox

Peer Edit, Wilber Reyes

You have a lot of good information. I would say find more community resources to write about, expand that section, (ymcas, boys and girls club, health clinics, etc). And make in text citations, about the book that was referenced in demographics. You have some good demographics info about grad rates. And median household incomes, should probably try to find more info in regards to income, expand that topic a little more. Also should look up some more current initiatives going on in Mattapan. More recent urban policies after 06. Good info on the population shifts.

Wilber Reyes01 (talk) 22:26, 3 April 2015 (UTC)

Another draft on Mattapan
Hi, I'm Adam and I'm providing support for your course. Have you taken a look at 's sandbox? It looks like you're working on the same subject and I think you might find it helpful to work together on changes to the article. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:51, 7 April 2015 (UTC)