User talk:NicoleR18/sandbox

Hello Nicole, just stopping in to get a peer review in. I'm not sure what to do about a peer review action. Everything is in the beginning stages so its obvious you will be putting it together piece by piece which is an excellent idea. I think I'm gonna go to your sandbox for ideas in getting my assignment done! Well I don't have much to say about the peer review other than your doing great! Keep up the good work!(MarcosXavier78 (talk) 17:42, 12 May 2019 (UTC))

Hi, peer reviewing. The article is informative but could include what reactions on the outside was to the prison strike. Also was there a specific event the caused the strike? Maybe there could be more information about what is happening now in the prison, is everything the exact same? Were prisoners in trouble for striking? Overall great article to choose! Desiraeb (talk) 00:15, 16 May 2019 (UTC)

Hey Nicole, I was wondering if you could you add a section of "In popular culture" so that readers can look up shows and documentaries in which this strike was represented. It will be interesting to know media recreations of the strike whether for viewing or for reading. (Cquaye2 (talk) 10:42, 17 May 2019 (UTC))

Hi there, peer review here! I was wondering if you were possibly looking into reasons why inmates went on hunger strikes and who started them. There may be some reoccurring themes to look out for. Also, as mentioned before me, seeing what society outside of the prison though about the hunger strikes might be an interesting section to add. I feel like people's reactions to hunger strikes may have changed a bit from 2013 to now. I think you have great starting comments on what you are planning to add and am excited to see the end result! Melissaglvn (talk) 03:10, 20 May 2019 (UTC)

Hey another peer review! I'm not sure if you're still working on the Conversion to Islam... article, but if so, I agree with checking for bias. Currently the article seems to lean towards conversion as a problem. It seems like there could be space to add documentation on why Islam specifically is a draw to prisoners, as well as religion in general. Otherwise, good luck with your final project! Tarynl (talk) 08:12, 20 May 2019 (UTC)