User talk:Nicole Quinn

Your submission at Articles for creation: Charles Eaves (May 9)
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Winner 42 Talk to me!  01:11, 9 May 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Dr. Apple (May 9)
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Winner 42 Talk to me!  02:43, 9 May 2015 (UTC)

AfC notification: Draft:Work at the Trestle has a new comment
 I've left a comment on your Articles for Creation submission, which can be viewed at Draft:Work at the Trestle. Thanks! FoCuSandLeArN (talk) 19:58, 19 May 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: T.T. Vernon Smith (June 15)
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Accents 18:36, 15 June 2015 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: Charles Eaves has been accepted
 Charles Eaves, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created. The article has been assessed as Start-Class, which is recorded on the article's talk page. You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article. You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! Accents 11:44, 16 June 2015 (UTC)
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Your submission at Articles for creation: T. T. Vernon Smith has been accepted
 T. T. Vernon Smith, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

You are more than welcome to continue making quality contributions to Wikipedia. . Thank you for helping improve Wikipedia! MatthewVanitas (talk) 17:16, 19 June 2015 (UTC)
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Note, do not cite Wikipedia onto itself
Greetings, I approved your draft at T. T. Vernon Smith, so it's published now. I did some cleanup since you had section headings slightly wrong (using sub-sub-headings when you should use sub-headings), and some other minor bits.

The big thing though, I remove the citations to other Wikipedia articles. It is absolutely not an option to cite Wikipedia on itself, since that would be circular reasoning. Instead, please take a look at GoogleBooks, an note there are several books (modern and historical) which discuss the controversy over the Partridge foghorn. I understand you may have some ties to the subject, but please stay neutral and do not cherry-pick from sources to make Smith look good. If some people say he invented it but some serious scholars note he's accused of stealing the foghorn design, you need to at least mention that for proper disclosure.

In general, take a look at GoogleBooks and see if you can find more substantiation for some of the stated facts in your article. Note you can instantly turn any GoogleBooks URL into a full Wikipedia footnote using http://reftag.appspot.com

Thanks for your contribution, hope you'll stick around! MatthewVanitas (talk) 17:23, 19 June 2015 (UTC)

Draft:Dr. Apple concern
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Your draft article, Draft:Dr. Apple


Hello, Nicole Quinn. It has been over six months since you last edited your Articles for Creation draft article submission, "Dr. Apple".

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Thanks for your submission to Wikipedia, and happy editing. JMHamo (talk) 00:34, 21 November 2015 (UTC)