User talk:Nicolelaurenmarquez

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Your edits to Transgender people and religion
Hey there! Thanks for your edits to transgender people and religion :) for the time being, I've removed the text from the article, since there are a few things that need to be punched up before the text is ready by Wikipedia's standards: I see that you have the text in your sandbox, that's great place to make changes before instituting the text back into the article. Thanks! theleekycauldron (talk • she/her) 04:18, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
 * 1) The text currently isn't citing very reliable sources. For something like this, I'd recommend looking in scholarly journals.
 * 2) Some of the writing reads more like an essay and less like an encyclopedic entry. First and foremost, remove any personal opinions from the text. Second, try and pick a specific thing to make each paragraph about and focus on it. Maybe one paragraph on the history of Sikhism and LGBT topics, one on current attitudes, etc.