User talk:Nicolelswords/sandbox

Professor Schreiber feedback
Nicole - This is a great start. You have some very valuable information about Brelliat's films here. However, I would advise you to revise some of your phrasing, which is a bit choppy at times. Let me know if you want me to identify specific passages that would be good to work on. MJSProf (talk) 18:25, 15 April 2018 (UTC)