User talk:Nicoleobrien6/sandbox

Hello,

I like the article and your style of writing, it is engaging and it makes me want to know more. My suggestion is to find more sources so that your biography is more robust. Caroline Kuhn — Preceding unsigned comment added by CKuhnH (talk • contribs) 09:58, 7 January 2020 (UTC)

Maybe have more information on her early life into her career and any ups and downs she might have faced. Maybe have some more about her current life and what she doing atm. More citations--Aeneas441 (talk) 09:57, 7 January 2020 (UTC)

Hello, I have made some comments in capital letter in the text in your sandbox, so that you can improve the article. It is about giving a bit of more context, then including a reference, and in another section is including an example. --CKuhnH (talk) 18:15, 5 March 2020 (UTC)