User talk:Nics547/sandbox

Okay. . . looks promising.

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You're article evaluation seems complete. Good job man, keep grinding. Dominador495 (talk) 20:18, 27 February 2019 (UTC)

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How's the sourcing search going? You'll need to find four or five objective, reliable sources for the improvements you want to make. Profhanley (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 18:19, 6 March 2019 (UTC)

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I'm thinking that rather than a scattershot patching here and there, might it be better to think about developing a new section or improving a section of the article? For instance, the PTSD info is really interesting - - perhaps a more productive improvement would be to focus on medical applications of VR. Profhanley (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 16:48, 18 March 2019 (UTC)