User talk:Niese05/Cognitive science of religion/Jad Mada Peer Review

Additional Feedback
Content:

Although your current edits and contributions are relevant and meaningful, I would suggest that you add more content that sufficiently expands on the sections discussing the key concepts of cognitive byproduct, pro-social adaptation, and dual inheritance. For example, the original article's Lead section delves into the disciplines of the cognitive science of religion, such as archaeology and developmental psychology. The article body, on the other hand, does not adequately explain the significance and role of each discipline as they pertain to the cognitive science of religion. As a result, I would advise you to include more relevant, well-supported, and properly cited information that adequately reflects the information introduced and discussed in the Lead section. To further develop the article, I would also recommend adding new sections to communicate your newly acquired research and information on the subject. Nonetheless, your current contributions provide increased detail on the topic of the article, as well as the information delivered in the Lead section.

Sources and References:

After referencing the original article, I noticed a message indicating that there are not enough citations to adequately reflect the information presented. As a result, I recommend that you consider including relevant and supporting citations in your draft wherever possible. This way, you can properly credit the educational researchers who proposed and examined these ideas. Although I see that the information you have contributed is well-supported and properly cited, I would recommend that you also review the original article and cite the content found there accordingly, in order to help verify the information outlined in the article. I see how you explained the quality of the article and its purpose in demonstrating your research in your bibliography. However, the annotations should be more detailed and relevant to your article.

~Jad Mada Jad Mada (talk) 15:25, 23 October 2022 (UTC)