User talk:Nightryda1

Kenoe
Hi there. If it is not clear to you, I would like to explain why I have removed so much of the information from this page. Firstly the information does not have a single reference, and as per wikipedia's guidelines anything that is not referenced may be challenged and removed. The paragraphs I removed were also riddled with grammatical and formatting errors. The main reason I have removed them however, is because of the nature of language and claims. Wikipedia is a neutral encyclopaedia; please read WP:WORDS. The paragraphs were written as one would expect on a fan website. I'll analyse the first three sentences of the first paragraph.


 * "Working diligently on his music" - opinionated, should just be 'Working on his music'.
 * "Kenoe was also a respected Basketball Player, and was part of a State Championship teams in Basketball and Track." - If this is to remain we need a reliable reference from a third party that his basketball skills were so great he was 'respected'.
 * "Kenoe had no idea that meeting Rapper and Executive, C-Murder on the basketball court would be life changing." - Needs serious rewording 'Kenoe met rapper and executive C-Murder on a basketball court' then going on to explain what happened next would be appropriate. Of course this still needs a citation.

I'd go on but basically the whole thing is terribly written by wikipedia's standards and completely unreferenced. This is a more detailed explanation of why I removed these paragraphs than the one I gave in thee edit summary. In the future do not revert another users edits without explaining your actions, it is considered vandalism. If you have any questions feel free to ask me. Have a nice day. Freikorp (talk) 06:32, 28 September 2011 (UTC)