User talk:Nigist1921

Nice work!
Posted automatically via sandbox guided tour. Nigist1921 (talk) 15:21, 4 September 2015 (UTC)

Welcome!
Hello, Nigist1921, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with the Wiki Education Foundation; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.

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article of choice
Hi Nigist1921,

I was reviewing the article you wanted to select for class and noted that it is listed as a stub class article. However, if you look at the article, it is pretty long and detailed and after looking at the revision history it looks like it underwent significant revision fairly recently. I think the article will need to be re-assessed for class and can no longer be considered a stub. I think for our class you may have to select another article. I will give an in class demonstration of the articles, choosing an article, and looking at revision history. I think the article you picked would be a lot of fun and a great way to learn more about the topic, but it may be frustrating given the scope of the class. N0 worries though, we have time to adjust article selection! Saguaromelee (talk) 20:16, 17 September 2015 (UTC)

Editing the article
Hi Nigist1921, I found your article to be very well organized and easy to follow along with, but there was a lack of paragraphs that I found a little disconcerting. I would add a paragraph to introduce the sub-headings, and to give readers a sense about what it is that they are going to be reading about. The introduction of the article itself is also a little abrupt, especially that last sentence and could use some further explanations to clarify the article as a whole. MassBlade (talk) 16:02, 16 October 2015 (UTC)