User talk:Nignaco/sandbox

Peer Review by Megan
Content: I think the content of your article is good. The introduction is strong and concisely states what the article is going to be about. I also like how you start the History section off with a quote and develop the company more throughout the history section. I think there are some grammar corrections you can make to the final paragraph in history in order to make it more clear. Also I could be wrong but you might want to add periods to the sentences in the following sections.

Tone: For the tone you remain neutral throughout the article, I think maybe be careful about using adjectives like "tremendous" when describing things as this could be seen as biased. If there are any scandals or issues with the brand you could also include those.

Sources: All the sources seem reliable to me, I would just reccomend adding the real site as a source?

Good job overall! I am excited to see how you develop this article moving forward.