User talk:NikeaBanks/sandbox

Very interesting topic, and it's clear that a lot of thought and research went into it. It might be better if you changed the word "resembled" to "reflected", and instead of "display", you could say "emphasize". It would also have been helpful to see parts of the article being edited, so I could see where the additions are to be made. Great work so far! HighQueenErin (talk) 19:23, 23 April 2020 (UTC)HighQueenErin

I like your topic. The revised section looks a lot better. It would also be helpful to see which section the wider context goes into. Lrichar (talk) 18:15, 28 April 2020 (UTC)