User talk:Nikki048/sandbox

Nikki's Peer Review
Your lead section is easy to understand I like how you started off your first section because it was not long and it was very concise. You got straight to the point. Your structure so far is nice, you need a couple more section to better determine how the structure is going to end up looking. I like that you had bullet points at the bottom so I can see what the coverage of the page is going to be on. Your sources are well and reliable. Your content is good so far! Keep it up!

Great first draft of your article.It was very comprehensible and clear and the structure flowed well together. Some things that could be improved could be to expand on your article and to add citations after each sentence. Camiokahara (talk) 23:46, 24 October 2018 (UTC)Cami Okahara