User talk:Niland.g

To Whom it May Concern,

I was hoping to get some feedback with my additions to the Kraft Foods article. I believe my additions of the sections "Irene Rosenfeld Influence and Rationale on Purchase" and "Fallout Acquisition" contain good information, but could need some work. Is my writing style acceptable? Are my Heading appropriate? Is there anything that needs to be removed or added?

Thanks

Kraft Foods Sections
To Whom it May Concern,

I was hoping to get some feedback with my additions to the Kraft Foods article. I believe my additions of the sections "Irene Rosenfeld Influence and Rationale on Purchase" and "Fallout Acquisition" contain good information, but could need some work. Is my writing style acceptable? Are my Heading appropriate? Is there anything that needs to be removed or added?

Thanks