User talk:Nina Thompson/sandbox

Hey Nina! I think that you did an excellent job on your wikipedia contribution. I was very engaged and learned a a lot from your contribution. I think that you could probably add a visual of police brutality in a specific area like the one you mentioned in your article. It could even be a graph including statistics that inform the reader about the amount of people incarcerated in certain areas (which is the effect of police brutality). I learned new information from your article, but I think that maybe you could also transition a little bit better, because towards the middle/end it seemed like a jump talking about post civil war era and to today's effects of police brutality. Again, amazing job & looking forward to seeing to your contribution on wikipedia! - Alexis Castillo :)